vr_trakowski: (Meander)
vr_trakowski ([personal profile] vr_trakowski) wrote2010-10-14 09:38 pm

A Maze of Twisty Passages, All Alike

Chapter Eight of Meander is now posted.  It is Inception, Arthur/Ariadne, and rated PG-13.

Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] cincoflex for telling me where this chapter went wrong!  And again, near-instant banner, wow. 






 




The top-level Dream is skimpy, but it’s really only a framework for the deeper one.  Eames might have found it exciting, but I didn’t. 

Anybody out there remember Pearly?  *grin*  I know tanks don’t generally have enough room for what I’ve described, but hey, what’s the point of having a Dream if you don’t play with the aspects at least a little? 

I think I was in an old gold mine once, as a kid, but I don’t remember much.  My grandparents used to live in gold rush country. 

Still not satisfied with the ending of the mine scene, but oh well.