I don't think I have any extra bits for this one, I kind of wrote it in one go, though balancing the dream-states and the voices was a bit difficult.
I wanted Brass to be hallucinating the best possible things, not memories but sort of what his fantasies might be, though they aren't specifically that. At this stage I can't remember who was speaking in most of the asides.
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Date: 2011-07-12 04:41 am (UTC)I wanted Brass to be hallucinating the best possible things, not memories but sort of what his fantasies might be, though they aren't specifically that. At this stage I can't remember who was speaking in most of the asides.
Nobody got the Trek joke, alas...