What are stories but imagination?

[vr_trakowski]

Snabbled from astrogirl2 because it sounded like fun:

Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know. 

Anybody else? 

Comments

To the End of Love

[boubabe14.livejournal.com]

Holy Handkerchiefs! How amazingly beautiful that was, and tense, and sad, and so much emotion. Why? Why do you write such intricate characterizations that I get completely and totally absorbed into the story? TPTB would never deserve such a well thought-out storyline from a CSI writer. I love you. But you already know that :-)

Re: To the End of Love

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

Hee! Love you too.

First line: "We've been avoiding this. You know it's time."

Last line: In the end, the silence said it all.