Stage two...

[vr_trakowski]

The second chapter of Halfway to the Moon is now up. If you spot any errors, please let me know...

Comments

review

[gglovebug.livejournal.com]

Gee - I'm not too far behind in catching up on my reading, am I? ;-P I really enjoyed this chapter, VR. I giggled out loud when you had Grissom sitting on the curb, waiting for Sara to wake up, and her reaction upon seeing him outside her kitchen window. The Butterfly Exhibit was the ideal place for the two of them to begin to reconnect and the imagery you created was superb. (The mental picture I have of Grissom with butterflies perched at both ends - priceless! LOL.) You really have captured Grissom and Sara's personalities well. The pacing seems perfect. I'm looking forward to each update! :-D

Re: review

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks! Glad you like the double butterfly image--I had fun with that scene. I'd love a photo of it myself.

Next update should be Wednesday.