Well, I should have earlier, but I plead no time and a bad cold. The next chapter of Halfway to the Moon is now up. And thanks to everyone who's reviewed already!
*blush* Thank you! I'm delighted that the OCs are working so well, I consider them hard to make believable when readers know the other characters so well already.
But then I've been fond of Ed for longer than CSI has existed...
If you do find something, please do let me know. :D I love concrit too!
Thanks again--getting reviews from excellent authors as well as friends always makes my day in the best way.
Re: Chapter 4.
Date: 2005-09-01 12:37 pm (UTC)But then I've been fond of Ed for longer than CSI has existed...
If you do find something, please do let me know. :D I love concrit too!
Thanks again--getting reviews from excellent authors as well as friends always makes my day in the best way.
Re: Chapter 4.
Date: 2005-09-01 12:39 pm (UTC)