I absolutely LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this chapter! The feelings shared between Grissom and Sara are so vivid here. I felt like I was intruding on their private moment when she surprised him at the marina. Wonder what he's told his mom about Sara.
My favorite lines:
She was so warm and alive and his, his, his--he wanted to fold her into himself, he wanted to kneel at her feet, he wanted to tell her how much she meant to him, but he couldn’t bear to pull away for an instant.
Your beautiful words brought tears to my eyes. Sigh...
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, though I don't want this story to ever end!
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Date: 2005-10-26 04:25 pm (UTC)My favorite lines:
She was so warm and alive and his, his, his--he wanted to fold her into himself, he wanted to kneel at her feet, he wanted to tell her how much she meant to him, but he couldn’t bear to pull away for an instant.
Your beautiful words brought tears to my eyes. Sigh...
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, though I don't want this story to ever end!
-Rica
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Date: 2005-10-27 01:13 am (UTC)