Another awesome and lovely chapter. So nice to hear them finally say 'I love you'. You're descriptive, but not too descriptive, and it's so easy for the reader to relax and lose themselves in this. The scene with them in her bedroom - it totally played out like a movie in my head(more so than any other piece of fanfiction), it was so vivid. I don't know, maybe it's because of the journey you have us on and the connection I feel with your story. Ok, this sounds lame now.
Anyway ....
I didn't know it was your birthday. I'll join the rest of the group and say HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Hope it was/will be (since I don't know if it was yesterday or today) wonderful!
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Date: 2006-01-26 02:16 pm (UTC)Anyway ....
I didn't know it was your birthday. I'll join the rest of the group and say HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Hope it was/will be (since I don't know if it was yesterday or today) wonderful!
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Date: 2006-01-26 09:06 pm (UTC)