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Heh, thanks to those of you who left such kind comments in my last entry. I'm still not terribly pleased with the chapter, but it's very good to know that people do like it. You're such sweethearts!

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Oh, I think this chapter is indeed very wonderful! It's a lovely slice of everyday life, with just enough romance/humor to give it an edge. Warrick's appreciation of Sara's legs, Grissom's adjustment apprehension, Sara's settling in -- you make them real, and that's no small accomplishment!