Stage Three!

[vr_trakowski]

Chapter 3 of "Halfway to the Moon" is now posted. Ah yes, link. I'm always afraid I'll misspell the URL somehow.

Edited to correct the title. Sheesh, how brain-dead am I?

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Chapter 3

[marlou-carmen.livejournal.com]

I'm just going to comment here on the chapter. Not that (again) I have anything worthwhile to say except for a 'Squeeeee!'.

Grissom rolled his eyes. “Don’t get me started on those two. It was bad enough when Greg was just a lab tech, but seeing one of my best CSIs hopping frantically down the corridor because somehow Hodges glued the legs of his jumpsuit together and the zipper closed…”

Too funny that. I would love to see that played out on the screen once.

Gracie's adorable, (and pretty different from the W&G's one, I think. ;) ), and I would like to see the kids some more. Kimmie, but Jason in particular.

The whole Grissom/Sara aspect is wonderful as usual. What else can be said? Honest and sweet and thrilling and so well written it's once again a true joy to read.

Marlou.

(Oh, I friended you btw.)

Re: Chapter 3

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

Heh, thank you! I am having fun with this one.

I loathe W&G, and love Ms. Messing from "Prey", where she played a brilliant scientist. Quite a contrast. All the more fun to make her smart again...