Loved it. I'm glad that we got to see some more of Gracie. How sad about her ex - tragic, but a nice little bit to bring her and Ed closer. And Grissom cooking and taking care of the house *swoons* He so good with those children, it's nice to see that part of him. It was also nice to feel the sexual tension right along with them - they keep taking it up a notch but still taking it slow - I'm not minding that one bit.
Thank you! Ed and Gracie keep threatening to take over this story, but I'm trying to keep them back. *hefts whip and chair* Drat these hyperintelligent scientists anyway.
*bows* Thank you! They're not entirely original, actually, the adults both come from "Prey", but I did make some liberal modifications and they really are taking on a life of their own. The kids, now...
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