Done and done

[vr_trakowski]

Chapter 18 of "Halfway to the Moon" is now posted. I can feel smug now.

Comments

[shippygrl.livejournal.com]

I like it veddy much! Poor Gracie~but it's good that Ed's there for her. And Grissom stepping up and making dinner was cute.

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *grin* He really is adorable when he's being domestic, isn't he?

[trashysexsonnet.livejournal.com]

I think it really says something about this fic that the development of the original characters is just as interesting as the canon.

Gah, I love it when you wear your gloves update.

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

*bows* Thank you! They're not entirely original, actually, the adults both come from "Prey", but I did make some liberal modifications and they really are taking on a life of their own. The kids, now...

[csipal.livejournal.com]

Loved it. I'm glad that we got to see some more of Gracie. How sad about her ex - tragic, but a nice little bit to bring her and Ed closer. And Grissom cooking and taking care of the house *swoons* He so good with those children, it's nice to see that part of him. It was also nice to feel the sexual tension right along with them - they keep taking it up a notch but still taking it slow - I'm not minding that one bit.

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

Thank you! Ed and Gracie keep threatening to take over this story, but I'm trying to keep them back. *hefts whip and chair* Drat these hyperintelligent scientists anyway.