[ Chapter 31 of HTTM is up now...not wonderful, but there. ]
You really are your own worst critic. You know that, right?
So, the chapter. Snippets of the little everyday domesticities (is that even a word?) always makes me grin.
You've got me wondering, however:
[ “Mm, I guess.” Grissom regarded the sleek machine sitting next to his own elegant one, an idea forming. “Sara, would you let me drive your car?” ]
And then him doing research before bed. What's he up to...?
I quite liked Sara's first day on the job...her intro to her coworkers. It played out well. She's cautious but not timid, and it looks like a good group.
Oh, and this... [ [snip] and Sara returned the firm grip, feeling both confident and...tall. ]
...had me giggling. I can relate. I'm 5'3" but the cleaning lady at work is about 4'9" and I feel sooo tall next to her. LOL
No big traumas or revelations, just a gentle continuation of a growing relationship. I enjoyed this...made a lovely break from a couple of angst-ridden stories I'm following. LOL
I look forward to the next chapter.
Question: Is the story just sort of unfolding, or to you have an idea where it's going? Just wondering.
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Date: 2006-03-22 01:18 am (UTC)[ ]
You really are your own worst critic. You know that, right?
So, the chapter. Snippets of the little everyday domesticities (is that even a word?) always makes me grin.
You've got me wondering, however:
[ ]
And then him doing research before bed. What's he up to...?
I quite liked Sara's first day on the job...her intro to her coworkers. It played out well. She's cautious but not timid, and it looks like a good group.
Oh, and this...
[ ]
...had me giggling. I can relate. I'm 5'3" but the cleaning lady at work is about 4'9" and I feel sooo tall next to her. LOL
No big traumas or revelations, just a gentle continuation of a growing relationship. I enjoyed this...made a lovely break from a couple of angst-ridden stories I'm following. LOL
I look forward to the next chapter.
Question: Is the story just sort of unfolding, or to you have an idea where it's going? Just wondering.