Wow.

[vr_trakowski]

With the addition of Chapter 23, HTTM has now topped 101,000 words.

Yikes.

Honestly, I didn't mean to write a novel! o_O

Comments

[tres_mechante.livejournal.com]

Is it really 101,000? Wow. Well, a story takes as long as it takes. And I salute you for your dedication to it. Nowhere in any of the chapters is there even a hint that you are tired of the story and just want it to end. Each part is of the same intensity as the beginning. ::applause::

So, things are moving along. I'm please to see Grissom willing to make the changes, to take steps to keep from falling back into old habits/patterns. That he talks about it as not stopping, but refocusing is certainly the right attitude.

Felt bad about his mom. I can see where the tension between them would take its toll on him. ::pets the distraught bugman::

And the bit about the rings? I can so picture him in the shop, examining the rings with the same intensity/expression/care that he uses to examine evidence. It charming. And the fact that Ed was his co-conspirator was sweet...the clueless leading the, well, also clueless. LOL

But this...
["Sara.” His voice was soothing, warm, just the sound of it made her spine relax. “Home is where you are. I’ll be home in five days.” ]

Oh, my girl, this was just the best. Made me feel all warm and fuzzy.

::contented sigh::

Wonderful chapter. Thank you so much for sharing.

[vr-trakowski.livejournal.com]

Good heavens, I'm blushing. Thank you! I don't particularly want the story to end, it's just going on much longer than I expected it to. But hey, I'm learning a lot.

Ed is clueless, yeah...but his heart's in the right place! I.e., Gracie's pocket. *grin*